Choose Words for Effect

Strong words make an impact.

Vibrant verbs and sensational adjectives add excitement to your writing.

To improve your writing, try not to use nouns like "stuff" and "things."

Try not to use words like "best" or "very."

Come up with better verbs than "said," "ran" or "walked."

Revise your drafts by replacing ho-hum words with powerhouses!

Practice Questions...

1. Revise the story below. Replace the words "said," "ran," and "very."

The wolf ran to the pig's house. "I'll huff, and

I'll puff, and I'll blow your house down!" the wolf said.

The pig was very scared.

2. Decide whether the words below are "vibrant verbs," "sensational adjectives," or "ho-hum words." Mark in the column to show your choices.

Answer Key

1. Responses will vary. Here are some possible substitutions:

ran = flew, sprinted, raced

said = bellowed, roared,

very scared = petrified; terrified